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					<description><![CDATA[Film review: Shiva Baby (2020) Shiva Baby demonstrates the continuing power and richness of the classic theater trope of a dinner party gone bad. The film is a fast paced comedy that concentrates on family dynamics, inter-generational conflict, sexual complexities, and social repression. But not everyone gathered for the shiva in Shiva Baby understands the ... <a title="Film review: Shiva Baby" class="read-more" href="http://www.stephensossaman.com/shiva-baby/" aria-label="Read more about Film review: Shiva Baby">Read more</a>]]></description>
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<h1 class="wp-block-heading">Film review: Shiva Baby (2020)</h1>



<p><em>Shiva Baby</em> demonstrates the continuing power and richness of the classic theater trope of a dinner party gone bad. The film is a fast paced comedy that concentrates on family dynamics, inter-generational conflict, sexual complexities, and social repression.</p>



<p>But not everyone gathered for the shiva in <em>Shiva Baby</em> understands the anguish and panic of the fewer central characters. They are unaware of the crises all around them, like the unobservant peasants in Peter Bruegel’s “The Fall of Icarus,” or Americans who don’t vote.</p>



<p>While some family members are working the room, others are panicked because their deepest secrets are coming uncovered.</p>



<p>Most plays expose those secrets to the whole entourage, a necessity of live staging when all characters are confined to one room. But the film medium permits private conversations, of course, and lets characters move to back yards or driveways more easily than live staging allows. Still, the central characters risk eavesdropping and unexpected interruptions.</p>



<p><em>Shiva Baby</em> exploits this, providing the audience with exposition and some confrontations in brief private exchanges, and then returning the characters to the crowded rooms, and a need to speak indirectly.</p>



<p>The film wonderfully presents multi-person conversations in which one character indirectly taunts another character, or asks loaded but seemingly innocent questions that threaten to expose the other’s damaging secrets. These attacks are heard but not understood by most of the people who think they are in the conversation.</p>



<p>Underneath the small talk chatter and froth there are serious dangers in trying to dodge lethal, focused cross-examination questions. Lies are hastily invented, and room exits are abruptly engineered, but there is no place to hide.</p>



<p>This device demands very good writing and good acting, and <em>Shiva Baby</em> delivers both.</p>



<p>This review might make <em>Shiva Baby</em> seem like a talky film, but it is not. The film effectively employs movement and objects to keep the chaos and tension high — a misplaced cellphone with an incriminating screen, two bracelets, the car, food, household and religious objects, and the annoyed and annoying baby. The film has a lively camera, and a fast pace.</p>



<p>It’s not easy for two people to renegotiate their secret, complicated, improper, intimate relationship in a crowd of family, with their negotiation spoken in code, interrupted, and resumed in another room, only to be interrupted again. With high stakes, this interrupted dialog is very tense for the characters, and very comic for the viewer.</p>



<p>Thank you for asking: the primary thematic point of <em>Shiva Baby</em> seems to be that the bourgeois pretense of order, success, upward mobility, and traditional professed values is a veneer that sometimes comes unglued. Underneath that veneer, some people live entirely differently. And they live under constant scrutiny.</p>



<p><em>Shiva Baby</em> (2020) was written and directed by Emma Seligman, at about the age of 25. Now that is something a parent could brag about at a gathering without having to make stuff up.</p>
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					<description><![CDATA[A stand up comic can write a wonderful 10-minute play out of one routine. All you need for a play are two characters in an interesting conflict. Theaters offering a 10-minute play festivals primarily select comedies, and often appeal to the same audiences that love stand-up. Nearly all ten-minute play festivals explicitly reject monologs. After ... <a title="Turn your stand-up comedy set into a 10-minute play" class="read-more" href="http://www.stephensossaman.com/turn-your-stand-up-comedy-set-into-a-10-minute-play/" aria-label="Read more about Turn your stand-up comedy set into a 10-minute play">Read more</a>]]></description>
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<p>A stand up comic can write a wonderful 10-minute play out of one routine. All you need for a play are two characters in an interesting conflict. Theaters offering a 10-minute play festivals primarily select comedies, and often appeal to the same audiences that love stand-up.</p>



<p>Nearly all ten-minute play festivals explicitly reject monologs. After all, the very nature of theater is unmediated conflict among characters. Those festivals insist on plays having two characters, and sometimes they tolerate a third and fourth, despite the casting complications.</p>



<h3 class="wp-block-heading"><strong>Why should a stand-up comedian do this?</strong></h3>



<p>Maybe you successfully delivered a particular set at the only stand-up comedy club in your town, and you have no plans to take it out of town. A successful 10-minute play can be produced any number of times around the country without your having to be present.</p>



<p>Maybe you have a comedy set that you personally can’t deliver effectively because this is not the story of someone of your age, gender, or body type. A young woman can surely write a brilliant set whose persona is an old man, but it might take an old man to deliver on stage most effectively. Many stand up comics have routines involving or depending on their own gender, physical appearance, and ethnic identity, but why waste a good idea that doesn’t fit you personally?</p>



<p>Maybe you have a set about a situation that would be especially effective if delivered by two actors, rather than retold by one comedian. If your set is not observational, but instead reports a conversation, great. Audiences in comedy clubs identify with the comic who tells a story, but for an exciting and fair fight, two well-matched characters on stage is hard to beat.</p>



<p>Consider a quarreling couple, the roommate from hell, or a dispute with a DMV clerk. There is more tension if the second character can actually speak for and defend himself or herself. That’s the essence of plays.</p>



<h3 class="wp-block-heading"><strong>Stand up routines are akin to short plays</strong></h3>



<p>Like a traditional play, a typical stand up comedy routine has a character and a situation, such as a first date. Spoken lines dominate both forms, and no one expects a short play to develop a character deeply.</p>



<p>Camino Real Playhouse likes a short play that has “a beginning that grabs your attention, a middle with some meat and character development, and an ending that makes sense.” That sounds like a good stand-up set, too.</p>



<p>A traditional play has a character with an objective, an uncooperative antagonist, and one or more complications or obstacles. By the end of the play the objective might or might not have been met, but the audience has enjoyed watching someone pursue a goal, which is the essence of narrative.</p>



<p>There are differences between sets and plays, of course, leading to differences in audience involvement. A comedian tells a story and makes observations, while a playwright lets the audience experience the story as it happens, making their own observations. Stand-up offers a single, controlling narrator to trust and to identify with, while a short play lets the audience figure out where their sympathies lie, as they would if overhearing a conversation. Both dynamics are fun.</p>



<p>You don’t need or have time for a complex plot, but something needs to happen to make the situation different by the end of the play. A series of funny lines can obviate the need for the forward plot progress of a traditional narrative, and still lead to the big close that comics like to exit on.</p>



<h3 class="wp-block-heading"><strong>Stand-up comics have a big head start over most beginning playwrights</strong></h3>



<p>You already understand the importance of structure, rhythm, timing, compression, silences, the need for editing, the importance of trying material out before an audience, and the nuances of comedy.</p>



<p>You have already written dialog, and you have probably created several personas or characters for different material. So all that you might need to learn are a few playwriting principles, the required format for submissions, and strategies for submitting your play to theater festivals.</p>



<h3 class="wp-block-heading"><strong>Getting started</strong></h3>



<p>Find a set that reports a conversation, one character thwarting what the other wants, or disagreeing with a belief. You have such pairings in your sets, stories of you and someone else: a child, a parent, a boss, a significant other, a date, a clerk, a doctor, a cabbie.</p>



<p>If all of your sets are a series of your witty observations, rather than inter-personal conflicts, no problem. If there is no potential two-character inter-personal conflict in your set, you can divide the lines between two similar characters. Maybe two friends at the bar complaining about work. This simple bifurcation requires sparkling dialog and some disagreements and character differentiation to compensate for the lack of serious conflict.</p>



<p>If you have a free ranging set complaining about work, you can create characters and minor conflict if one character insists that the worst part of work is the stupid boss, and the other insists that no, the worst part is annoying coworkers.</p>



<p>Your routine is about the hassles of dating? Let the second character riff instead on the hassles of being in a relationship, maybe drawing material from a separate set you already have. No character likes to have his or her own suffering topped in the telling, so sparks should fly.</p>



<h3 class="wp-block-heading"><strong>Still no story? Sketches work, too</strong></h3>



<p>Most festival guidelines explicitly ask for play submissions to be traditional stories, not sketches. Those theaters want a protagonist with a personally important objective, conflict and obstacles, rising action, and then resolution, or at least closure, by the last page.</p>



<p>But do not despair if your routine is really a sketch: they can be accepted for some festivals, too. Sketches involve situations, not stories with character arcs. Sketches seem most readily accepted by festivals that market themselves as more of a variety show than play festival. Look for festivals set in bars or brewpubs, like Barhoppers in Charlottesville, the Cary Playwrights’ Bar Plays, or Home Brew Theater in Cincinnati.</p>



<p>To see which festivals do not insist on stories, read their websites’ taglines or synopses of plays that they have accepted in the past.</p>



<p>Consider one play selected for the 2018 Carrboro ArtsCenter festival. I have read but not seen <em>Theater More Like Baseball</em>, a 10-minute play by Mark Cornell. The story, before a surprise emotional reveal, is this: two people take a reluctant friend to see a play, but he rants about preferring baseball, since theaters don’t let you eat, or drink beer, or yell at the actors. The core of that play, the argument that baseball is better than theater, reads a lot like a comedy set.</p>



<p>Even comic routines that are a series of one-liners around a common idea can be adapted as sketches. Imagine a Rodney Dangerfield routine of jokes around his thematic complaint that he gets no respect, with the lines divided between two characters who one-up each other to be the more pitiable. And recall to mind the traditional street corner “dozens,” amusing bystanders by dueling insults.</p>



<p>Sketches usually have a character with a goal, but the goal is relatively unimportant. Monty Python’s Dead Parrot sketch is famous not because of one character’s inconsequential goal (getting a refund for a dead parrot) but because of the escalating, absurd argument: the pet store clerk insists the dead bird is merely resting. In Lucille Ball’s classic TV chocolate factory sketch, her goal (not getting fired) is merely a MacGuffin as we watch the physical comedy of her struggle with a conveyor belt.</p>



<h3 class="wp-block-heading"><strong>Just start writing the dialog</strong></h3>



<p>And then format your first draft in the form theaters want, which is easily searched online. Once you do this, count the pages. The script portion of your play, excluding two pages of front material, should be eight or nine pages long (the usual rough estimate is that a page of dialog takes one to one and a half minutes on stage). If you can, revise to nine pages.</p>



<p>If doing so ruins the play, let the play be whatever length it wants to be. Some festivals take <em>20</em>-minute plays, and occasionally a festival looks for <em>two</em>-minute plays, so let the play decide how long it wants to be. With Americans’ attention spans shrinking, short plays will always be in style.&nbsp;</p>
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<p><br>Theater is a collaborative process, of course, at the end of which everyone should be happy, not just the playwright and audience. We want to give actors interesting roles in an interesting play, not a menial chore. We can give them a head start towards success and satisfaction by following these suggestions.</p>



<h3 class="wp-block-heading"><strong>Help the actor understand her character</strong></h3>



<p>You will probably have only one opportunity to do this, since you will not be present at rehearsals or contacted by the director.</p>



<p>Do it by adding a tagline on the script cover page and by providing brief information in the cast of characters. A tagline on a script’s cover page has several benefits: it might motivate the script reader to want to like your play, and then to accept your play, and it might help the theater to cast the right actor and help focus the director on your thematic intention. And then a tagline can help the actors understand their characters.<br>&nbsp;<br><strong>Use your Cast of Characters opportunity</strong></p>



<p>Only two of these character description options would help the actor understand her character.</p>



<p><br>&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp; KAREN: 30s. &nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;</p>



<p>&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp; KAREN: 30s. Won’t trust anyone, even herself. &nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;</p>



<p>&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp; KAREN: 30s. Eager for new friends.<br>&nbsp;<br><strong>Let the actor make acting decisions</strong></p>



<p>Your script should tell the actor what to say, but not how to act. Leave those decisions to the actor and director. They enjoy making creative decisions as much as playwrights do, and have some training and experience. Even ambiguous dialog is not very risky if the director and actor know the intent of your play.<br>&nbsp;<br><strong>Give each character a significant role</strong></p>



<p>Never include characters who are not essential. Besides complicating casting troubles and clogging the green room during festivals, insignificant roles are likely to be turned down by actors who can act. Jeff Bushnell of North Park Vaudeville rightly says that “Each actor should have a decent sized part. No actor wants to come to a bunch of rehearsals to make a very short appearance in a short play.”</p>



<p>Actor Joe Perignat likes 10-minute plays in part because they “tend to have few roles, with all the roles being somewhat ‘principal.’ Typically, the actors are all on stage for the duration of the performance and therefore each has an opportunity to command the stage.”<br>&nbsp;<br><strong>Make the dialog speakable</strong></p>



<p>Unless you have a clever reason to give a speaker convoluted syntax, don’t. Avoid trying to write dialect. Long lines can cause breath problems, and lead actors into hurrying.<br>&nbsp;<br><strong>Make your play nine minutes, not ten</strong></p>



<p>Avoid the temptation to fully pack your ten pages. Too many lines make actors hurry, depriving the production of the very important acting that goes on during quiet moment between lines. Actors act during silences, but only if there are silences. Fewer lines also allow the director more creative latitude in timing and rhythm. Leave rapid talk and dread of silence to cable news channels.</p>



<p><strong>Name your characters</strong></p>



<p>Your audience might never hear the names of your characters spoken during the play, but you should name your characters anyway. It might have been cool once to name characters ONE and TWO, or WOMAN and MAN, but it isn’t cool now. Your first draft Cast of Characters might simply include BARISTA and MANAGER, but don’t send out your script before actually naming the characters (e. g. MARY, a perfectionist barista, and PAT, a harried manager).</p>



<p>An actor is happier if she can say at a cocktail party or at an audition, or in a later playbill bio, that “she played Mary in Starbucks Memories,” not just “the barista.” A role with a name seems more important, which might also help the actor persuade casual friends to buy tickets to the festival and your play.</p>
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					<description><![CDATA[10-minute plays: Embrace minimalism Plays happen on stage, but they also happen in the imaginations of the audience. The less there is on the stage, the more there is to imagine. Go for the great strength of the short play — a spare, intense, concentrated experience arising out of the irreducible essentials of theater: actors ... <a title="10-minute plays: Embrace minimalism" class="read-more" href="http://www.stephensossaman.com/10-minute-plays-embrace-minimalism/" aria-label="Read more about 10-minute plays: Embrace minimalism">Read more</a>]]></description>
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<p>Plays happen on stage, but they also happen in the imaginations of the audience. The less there is on the stage, the more there is to imagine. Go for the great strength of the short play — a spare, intense, concentrated experience arising out of the irreducible essentials of theater: actors and dialog. Just give a theater interesting characters who speak great dialog in an interesting situation, and let that theater have the rest of the creative fun.</p>

<h3 class="wp-block-heading"><strong>Write few characters</strong></h3>

<p>Two good actors with your good dialog can easily sustain an audience’s interest for ten minutes. Anton Chekhov wisely noted that even in a full length play “Only two should be at the center of gravity.”</p>

<p>Never use characters without dialog as props (e.g waitstaff, other people waiting for the bus). “Each actor should have a decent sized part,” says Jeff Bushnell, of North Park Vaudeville. “No actor wants to come to a bunch of rehearsals to make a very short appearance in a short play.”</p>

<p>Each additional character complicates a theater’s casting problems, and adds to the crowd in the dressing room. The only theater groups who might want scripts with supernumeraries are schools, senior center recreation programs, or others who want on-stage opportunities for an existing group.</p>

<p>Of course, your story might require more characters, such as when a character brings home a new love interest to meet the parents, or a first date is interrupted by an ex.</p>

<h3 class="wp-block-heading"><strong>Simplify your character descriptions</strong></h3>

<p>When you can. Because most theaters have a significantly larger casting pool of women than men, and both pools might be small, they might decline your good script with too many male characters in favor of one that is more easily cast. They might reject a great script because they are not be able to cast a character you describe as “Male, 90, bodybuilder, an Inuit with an Italian accent.”</p>

<p>If the gender, age and ethnicity of a character in your play are irrelevant to the play, add a note overtly stating that on your Cast of Characters page. That offers the theater casting flexibility, and should reassure them that you share their commitment to inclusion, are open to their creative decisions about casting and directing, and are not difficult to work with.</p>

<h3 class="wp-block-heading"><strong>Write for an empty set</strong></h3>

<p>Your play succeeds or fails on actors delivering dialog, not on sets. 10-minute plays do not need sets, they just need actors, a script, and an audience. No Shame Theatre began by offering exciting theater from the back of a pick-up truck, illuminated by motorcycle headlamps. The set for Barhoppers plays in Charlottesville is whatever bar is the venue, nothing more.</p>

<p>Most theater festivals have a set with two or three simple props (perhaps one chair and a box). Directors can shift the chair for their own plays, but not every festival allows items to be moved on or off stage in the 60 seconds usually allotted between the end of one 10-minute play and the beginning of the next.</p>

<p>A few theaters tell playwrights in their calls for submissions what props will be on stage, but most theaters just ask for plays with no set demands. That should not be a problem for a 10-minute play.</p>

<p>How important are your set requirements in getting your play accepted? Darlene Kersner, of Pegasus Theater, told me that “When picking 10-minute plays to produce or direct, I look first of all for pieces that have simple set requirements.”</p>
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<p>“Imagine the stage, not the location.”</p>
<p>Lucy Prebble</p>
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<h3 class="wp-block-heading"><strong>Establish the setting without a set</strong></h3>

<p>You might not need to establish a setting — the audience won’t demand to know where a marital argument happens, for example.</p>

<p>But if your setting does matter, your dialog might make the setting obvious without your even trying. Mission accomplished if your opening line is “Sorry, buddy, the bar’s closing” or “I need to return this sweater” or “The doctor will see you now.”</p>

<p>One simple, hand-carried prop can establish your play’s setting. In my short play <em>Little Felicity</em>, the audience immediately knows the play is set in a garden because one character wears a garden hat and carries a watering can — both of these props get carried on and off stage by the actor herself without involving stage crews or delaying the next play.</p>

<p>Your play title can identify or imply the setting, but some audience members won’t read the program. Most 10-minute play titles that I encounter say little or nothing about the play itself, which is fine because the audience has already bought tickets without caring about individual titles.</p>

<p>The majority of the plays in the 2019 festival staged by 4th Street Theater in Indiana are, like most 10-minute play titles, light on clues to content or genre: <em>Frameworks</em>, <em>Goodbye Itzy-Bitzy</em>, <em>The Elimination Round</em>, <em>172 Pushups</em>, <em>You Haven’t Changed a Bit</em>, <em>Budget Airlines Flight 711</em>, <em>About Time</em>, and <em>Office Hours</em>. Not a problem.</p>

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<p>Peter Brook</p>
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<h3 class="wp-block-heading"><strong>Specify only essential props and costumes</strong></h3>

<p>Plays without costume requirements are more likely to be accepted. Actors who are cast in more than one play during a festival performance need to be able to change swiftly and easily between plays, and dressing rooms can get crowded.</p>

<p>Some small, hand-carried props might be essential to the play (e.g. a letter being discussed, a gun in a holdup, car keys being argued over).</p>

<h3 class="wp-block-heading"><strong>Ignore lighting</strong></h3>

<p>Lighting is an important, often unremarked but complex aspect of theatrical production, but your only obligation as a playwright is to write a script with no special lighting requirements. Once your play is accepted, your director and lighting designer will do the work.</p>

<p>The lighting design might be a simple lights-up lights-down for every play of the evening.</p>

<h3 class="wp-block-heading"><strong>Leave the blocking to directors</strong></h3>

<p>All you need to do is make sure that the intent of the play is clear. If you think the script might be misunderstood, you can do add a tagline or one-sentence synopsis to the cover or the Cast of Characters page. The tagline on the cover of my 10-minute play <em>What If We Did</em> is “Some people just can’t admit they are happily married.” I thought about writing instead “Some people just can’t accept responsibility.” Those taglines might seem to be about different plays, but either one works. I believe that a director might make different decisions based on which tagline is on their script.</p>

<h3 class="wp-block-heading"><strong>Leave the acting to the actors</strong></h3>

<p>Your script should ensure that actors know their characters, i.e. know <em>what</em> to act — but don’t tell them <em>how</em> to act. Delete gestural instructions like “rolls her eyes” or “puts his hands on his hips.”</p>

<p>The context should be enough for each actor to know how to deliver a line. But if a line of dialog is ambiguous, tell the actor by using a brief stage direction, e.g. (surprised) (sarcastic) (doubtful) (relieved).</p>

<h3 class="wp-block-heading"><strong>But — be brief, not minimalist, in describing characters</strong></h3>

<p>Which of these two versions of a Cast of Characters would catch the attention of the festival script reader? Which would make casting better? Which would provide more guidance to the director? We agree, it isn’t the minimalist one.</p>

<p>JANE: 30s<br />DICK: 50s</p>

<p>or this version:</p>

<p>JANE: 30s, out of jail, out of patience<br />DICK: 50s, a creepy-uncle type bail bondsman</p>

<p>If the festival person reading your submission immediately thinks of local actors, something like “Wow, Larry would make a great creepy-uncle character,” you have a head start towards acceptance. Even if the reader does not think of a local actor, your characters look interesting. Every advantage helps when you are competing with hundreds of other scripts.</p>
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					<description><![CDATA[10-minute plays: What audiences want Audiences want to be entertained They don’t want to be lectured or hectored. They want their attention kept on something interesting that someone else is doing. As an old Hollywood hand simply advised, don’t be boring. Start with interesting characters in an interesting situation, and then keep your play moving ... <a title="10-minute plays: What audiences want" class="read-more" href="http://www.stephensossaman.com/3651-2/" aria-label="Read more about 10-minute plays: What audiences want">Read more</a>]]></description>
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<h2 class="wp-block-heading"><strong><strong>10-minute plays: What audiences want</strong></strong></h2>

<h3 class="wp-block-heading"><strong>Audiences want to be entertained</strong></h3>

<p>They don’t want to be lectured or hectored. They want their attention kept on something interesting that someone else is doing. As an old Hollywood hand simply advised, don’t be boring. Start with interesting characters in an interesting situation, and then keep your play moving forward. Moving forward can mean new plot elements, or getting deeper into character and theme. Stalls can be fatal to aircraft, acrobats, and plays.</p>

<h3 class="wp-block-heading"><strong>Audiences want to be moved emotionally</strong></h3>

<p>Short play festivals tend to emphasize comedy and variety, for audiences that want to have fun. Festival plays are usually dominated by happy emotions, like love and empathy, rather than by negative emotions, like anger and envy.</p>

<p>Short plays cannot easily deliver the profound emotional impact that you seek in your full-length plays. Shakespeare needed far more than 10 minutes to build to the emotional peak of <em>King Lear</em>. Trying to provide an intense emotional moment without adequate preparation often leads to an unconvincing and implausible sentimentality. Like advertisements and political speeches, your play should manipulate your audience’s emotions in such a way as to not make them feel manipulated.</p>

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<p>“When the audience comes into the theatre, they disappear into the darkness with the common understanding that they are there to feel something.”</p>
<cite>Tamara Rojo</cite></blockquote>

<h3 class="wp-block-heading"><strong>Audiences want their beliefs and hopes affirmed</strong></h3>

<p>They do not want you to unleash your dogma to attack their dogma. Festival audiences want to relax in their comfy blanky of self-assurance. They enjoy edgy, but they have limits. Figuring out where this limit might be is part of the playwright’s job, even if she decides to push way past it.</p>

<p>Audiences do not want to be discomforted. Of course, what <em>they</em> want and what <em>you</em> want them to face might be quite opposite. Serious theater has always discomforted audiences to some extent. Find out what each festival seems to prefer by paying close attention to their submissions guidelines and to how they promote their festival. Some like hip and edgy plays, some prefer anodyne amusements. Some festivals want political contents, some do not.</p>

<h3 class="wp-block-heading"><strong>Audiences want something to talk about when they leave</strong></h3>

<p>Good plays dramatize challenging questions rather than simple answers. Would you rather see a 10-minute play that tells you that you should floss every day, or a play that leads you to consider (and later discuss with your theater companion) why people often act against their own interests, such as by not flossing?</p>

<p>Of course, you’re right, flossing is not a promising subject. Your audience would rather see a play about, and talk about afterwards, something more important to them, something not yet settled. That might be a compelling contemporary social issue like homelessness, or it might be an eternally unsettled universal matter like grief — or that puzzle of why people often act against their self interest.</p>

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<p>“The play that cannot be argued is not a serious play. The argument concerns ideas that cannot be resolved. But they can be discussed.”</p>
<cite>Stella Adler</cite></blockquote>

<h3 class="wp-block-heading"><strong>Audiences want to figure some stuff out for themselves</strong></h3>

<p>They like characters with a little mystery about them, and they like to ferret out conclusions about personality. We all do the same when we meet new people at a party, looking for clues to personality in gestures and remarks. Audiences do not need extensive backstory, which is good for playwrights, because they have very little time to provide backstory.</p>

<p>Audiences at short play festivals do not need to know everything about the characters’ open or secret motivations, their imperfect childhood history, or their hopes and dreams. Reveal enough for the characters and the play to make sense and to enrich the texture, but no more.</p>

<h3 class="wp-block-heading"><strong>Audiences want something familiar, but new</strong></h3>

<p>Yes, this is a paradox. Audiences want your play, no matter how deeply its story is rooted in the familiar (like a first date, or a marital quarrel) to offer something new. That surprise might be more than the usual plot twist. It might be something far more original involving character or theme, setting or culture.</p>

<p>Because it is new, it will be a surprise. Because it is a surprise, it will be pleasing. Your surprise will give the audience a brief moment of light-headed disorientation, and then the fun of feeling a response to the new. This is one secret of good stand-up comedy, and it might be the secret of your 10- minute play’s success.</p>
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					<description><![CDATA[After hearing a recording of Sharon Olds reading the opening of one of her poems, “Balladz,” I am reminded that the default “poetry voice” style of recitation or reading constrains the poem. It is obsolete and dated, but not yet abandoned. The poetry voice, as I hear it, is a relatively monotone and slow recitation ... <a title="The problem with the Poetry Voice" class="read-more" href="http://www.stephensossaman.com/the-problem-with-the-poetry-voice/" aria-label="Read more about The problem with the Poetry Voice">Read more</a>]]></description>
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									<p>After hearing a recording of Sharon Olds reading the opening of one of her poems, “Balladz,” I am reminded that the default “poetry voice” style of recitation or reading constrains the poem. It is obsolete and dated, but not yet abandoned.</p>
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<p>The poetry voice, as I hear it, is a relatively monotone and slow recitation at a slightly elevated pitch, sometimes with a bit of lift at the end of the line. There is a pause at the end of each line, whether the poem is end-stopped or enjambed when printed. Poetry voice recitations sound a bit as if the speaker is addressing a beginning ESL student, enunciating clearly and keeping a proper distance between words.</p>
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<p>The poetry voice is probably intended to deliver an ethereal sense of importance, a suggestion of wisdom. Varying line lengths might accomplish that on the printed page. The poetry voice is akin to the measured, elevated rhetoric of a Presbyterian sermon, or the solemnity of a eulogy, a poem celebrating a coronation, or grandpa explaining what a carburetor was.</p>
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<p>The poetry voice works OK for some poems, maybe, but not for most. Here is a problem. Delivering in the poetry voice, some poets sound pontifical, others sound as if in a trance. But a lot of poetry, especially contemporary poetry, is best received when delivered in a normal human conversational voice.</p>
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<p>That normal voice conveys authenticity, a sense of spontaneity, and intimacy. A conversational voice pleases listeners, and guides listeners, by revealing the poem’s intended unique rhythm of different speaker emotions at various points: a normal, unguarded voice relies on inflections to express changes in the arc of the speaker’s emotions and attitudes: certainty at one moment but hesitance at another. Yes, often there is a character arc in poems, perhaps most obviously in odes and meditations.</p>
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<p>Look at your own poems’ first and last lines. Has the unnamed speaker or persona of the poem learned something or changed in some of those poems?</p>
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<p>This variation in the speaker’s awareness is especially important in the fictive poems we write, those poems with a persona not the same as we ourselves, maybe a persona of a different gender, era, age, nationality, or profession. Such poems are scripts for a prepared reciter (if delivered orally) or a prepared reader, and cannot be “heard” well inside our imaginations upon first reading, or while listening to a recitation in the poetry voice. You as the poet are well prepared to recite your poem, but someone finding it in a printed literary journal is not.</p>
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<p>The actor Jessica Chastain reportedly did not nail her character at the cast’s first table reading of <em>The Eyes of Tammy Faye</em>. She totally nailed it after reading and understanding the whole script.</p>
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<p>Is a line meant to be understood as ironic? Is the utterance insistent or reluctant? Open or deceitful? Playful or angry? Whimsical or nihilistic?</p>
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<p>Have you ever read a serious, good poem on the page for the first time, and known how each line was meant to be heard? No. That is why reading screenplays is not nearly as rich an experience as hearing the same lines delivered by skilled actors who know the whole text before uttering the first line.</p>
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<p>The poetry voice is also akin to text-to-speech computer programs, without the perky enthusiasm of some corporate website chat programs.</p>
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<p>Speaking of text-to-speech programs, here is a fun diversion next time you are avoiding writing. Paste a poem of yours in the following link, go to the speaker icon to the left of the play button, and select a reader (you can select from several languages).</p>
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<p>This is a fun trip, and text actually sounds more nuanced than some poetry-voice recitations I have heard poets deliver. But does your poem survive the journey, <em>qua</em> poem? Even if the computer voice were slower, the answer would still be no.</p>
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<p>Your poem might not survive delivery in the poetry voice, either.</p>
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		<title>Five thoughts about the war in Ukraine, on the fifth day</title>
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					<description><![CDATA[Five thoughts about the war in Ukraine, on the fifth day 1. When Vladimir Putin continually insisted in public that Russians and Ukrainians are one people, he might not have considered whether this would seriously damage the morale and motivation of Russian soldiers when they are told to kill Ukrainians. 2. Grandmas heading out to ... <a title="Five thoughts about the war in Ukraine, on the fifth day" class="read-more" href="http://www.stephensossaman.com/five-thoughts-about-the-war-in-ukraine-on-the-fifth-day/" aria-label="Read more about Five thoughts about the war in Ukraine, on the fifth day">Read more</a>]]></description>
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									<p>1. When Vladimir Putin continually insisted in public that Russians and Ukrainians are one people, he might not have considered whether this would seriously damage the morale and motivation of Russian soldiers when they are told to kill Ukrainians.</p>
<p>2. Grandmas heading out to fight the Russian army? That is heroic, admirable, and inspirational. <em>Sending</em> them out, now that’s a different matter.</p>
<p>3. Grandmas fighting the Russian army is quixotic, but so too is Putin’s war against grandmas.</p>
<p>4. Crusty old veterans of the National Liberation Front are probably having tea with each other throughout Viet Nam, once again discussing tactics for how a people can best resist a modern army. Resistance was not easy for the Vietnamese, and it will be harder for the Ukrainians.</p>
<p>5. Putin is likely blaming his military for not rapidly fulfilling his grandiose plan. I hope his generals have lost patience with him. And I hope that Russian generals have learned enough about courage from Ukrainian soldiers and civilians to add Putin to the growing list of war dead.</p>
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					<description><![CDATA[Interview with Randy Brown Randy Brown is a poet, journalist, and editor, and a leading figure in the veterans’ writing movement. He is the author of the award-winning poetry collection Welcome to FOB Haiku (Middle West Press, 2015); editor of a 2016 book-length collection of citizen-soldier journalism; poetry editor of the on-line literary journal As ... <a title="Interview with Randy Brown" class="read-more" href="http://www.stephensossaman.com/interview-with-randy-brown/" aria-label="Read more about Interview with Randy Brown">Read more</a>]]></description>
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									<p>Randy Brown is a poet, journalist, and editor, and a leading figure in the veterans’ writing movement. He is the author of the award-winning poetry collection <i>Welcome to FOB Haiku</i> (Middle West Press, 2015); editor of a 2016 book-length collection of citizen-soldier journalism; poetry editor of the on-line literary journal <i>As You Were</i>; and a blogger on military experience, culture, and writing. In 2011, Brown was embedded as a civilian journalist with the 34th Infantry &#8220;Red Bull&#8221; Division, the Iowa National Guard unit with which he served before retiring in 2010.</p><p>This interview first appeared in<i> Live Oak Review</i>.</p><p><b>Stephen Sossaman</b>: Every war is different, and so too is the generation that fights it and writes about it. From your readings in contemporary war poetry, what about Afghanistan and Iraq — and military personnel today—seems different?</p><p><b>Randy Brown</b>: I&#8217;d like to think that there&#8217;s a growing appreciation for different voices, for different perspectives on the battlefield. A variety of voices now seems more easily available to us. Is that a function of how poetry is published and propagated today? Or answer to a growing call for narrative diversity? Either way, war poetry today isn&#8217;t as easily triaged into simple categories. It&#8217;s no longer just soldiers or aviators, enemies abroad or families waiting by the fires at home. Our war chorus has grown more complicated, more cacophonous.</p><p><b>SS</b>: So how much of this diversity do you think is due to cultural change, and how much to the vast opportunities of online publishing, ebooks, and self-publishing?</p><p><strong>RB</strong>: There&#8217;s a shift toward recognizing that every communicated experience of war is valid: Grunts and pogues, soldiers and civilians, male and female, gay and straight. I&#8217;m talking in binaries right now, but I&#8217;m thinking in spectra.</p><p><strong>SS</strong>: The poet Julian Symons, who served in the British army in WWII after his application as a conscientious objector was declined, wrote that “I don’t believe that the ‘war poet’ exists. All poets are war poets, and peace poets, too.” Do you agree that war is just another human experience among many that a poet can consider, or are there writers who would not write poetry if it were not for their extraordinary experience of war?</p><p><strong>RB</strong>: I agree with Symons&#8217; construction. Anyone can articulate an opinion or perspective on war, because we are all participants. War isn&#8217;t just combat. War isn&#8217;t just sending care packages and tying yellow ribbons. War is everything our society does and does not do, in our collective use of military force.</p><p>I was slow to apply the &#8220;war poetry&#8221; label to my work. The term came up during discussions of my collection&#8217;s subtitle. I think our first attempt was &#8220;Poems and other acts of insurgency.&#8221; We ended up with &#8220;War poems from inside the wire.&#8221; I think the final version connotes the two ways of conceptualizing &#8220;war poetry” — writing from war, writing about war. I did the former, but I do not dismiss the latter.</p><p><strong>SS</strong>: That phrase “inside the wire” wonderfully shows the humor and modesty of your war poems, which are free of the posturing that marked many veterans’ poems from my war, in Viet Nam. Your irony and self-effacing humor recall WWII poetry. Are those typical attributes of veterans’ poetry from Iraq and Afghanistan? If not, what does in general characterize their poems?</p><p><strong>RB</strong>: When I scan my shelves for my favorite poems from the war in Vietnam, I gravitate toward the ones that focus on the cold absurdity of finding yourself and your friends at war. Perhaps there&#8217;s a difference in agency? Many of that generation were drafted, conscripted. In Vietnam-era work, it seem to me that war is a grind, something that must be endured, and survived as much by luck as anything else. The absurdity and grind of war still exist in today&#8217;s &#8220;All-Volunteer Force,&#8221; of course, but we ultimately have no one but ourselves to blame.</p><p><strong>SS</strong>: You have written that “today&#8217;s military — and I include families in that label — live in a constantly constructed, hyperactive, self-mediated &#8230; Environment? Culture?”</p><p><strong>RB</strong>: Everything a soldier does is under constant surveillance — and is potentially shareable, instant and unfiltered, to the world. Our on-line reality has implications on the battlefield: pictures from Abu Ghraib, of U.S. Army reservists abusing prisoners. videos of U.S. Marines urinating on the corpses of Taliban fighters.</p><p>My observation is that, for the first time, the level of mediation exists predominantly with the individual soldier or family member.</p><p><strong>SS</strong>: That ability to share instantly from or to a combat zone (email, videos, Skype, Twitter, etc.) seems to me likely to encourage ephemeral, spontaneous, unedited, facetious and unstructured expression — not the hallmarks of earlier war poetry. Is your own practice of carefully crafted poems in a variety of traditional forms atypical of writing about Iraq and Afghanistan?</p><p><strong>RB</strong>: Journal editors who have published my &#8220;traditional&#8221; poems seem to appreciate my insurgent intentions — that I&#8217;m trying to follow rules in order to either break them later, or to make the act of reading them feel somewhat transgressive. I don&#8217;t feel entirely alone in those techniques. In stand-up comedy and social media memes, &#8220;surprise&#8221; is the atomic nucleus of humor. In poetry, surprise is the volta. In U.S. Army doctrine, surprise is one of the nine principles of war.</p><p>I thought I&#8217;d been clever, publishing a collection that fired off salvos of senryu about war. Then, I discovered an anthology of 21st century haiku, nearly 400 pages of that form written about war, violence, and Human Rights violations. Imagine my surprise.</p><p>We are most surprised when we fool ourselves.</p><p><strong>SS</strong>: Many people who are not really poets write poems. But when you consider the best of the contemporary war poets, do you see some common elements of style, form, subject, or tone, other than humor and irony?</p><p><strong>RB</strong>: I&#8217;ve seen more than a few writers work creatively with military nomenclature and jargon. The best use the language of the moment, not as an obstacle — not as a shibboleth or magic lamp — but as a way to root the work in a time, a place, a branch of service, a way of thinking. As a journalist and historian, I like when poetry serves as a snapshot, a news flash, a Morse code message to the future. Where providing contextual clues gets in the way of how a poem is intended to be read aloud, I also appreciate when a writer includes more detailed explanation of an acronym, initialism, or other military term. In my own work, I try to avoid footnotes, but I pack palletsful of end notes.</p><p><strong>SS</strong>: What are your own tastes in poetry?</p><p><strong>RB</strong>: Not surprisingly, I suppose, given my own work, I gravitate toward consuming poetry that&#8217;s shorter in form, relatively free of rhyme and rules — my own proclivities toward 5-7-5 haiku and Elizabethan sonnets notwithstanding. I use those rules because they&#8217;re easily recognized by American readers, especially my fellow soldiers, who think they don&#8217;t know or read or like poetry. Grade School is like Boot Camp: Everybody studies haiku and sonnets.</p><p>I like poems that break lines and images to create new things and meanings and meanings of things. I like Tweetable, accessible, plain-language words, deliverable in the same 3-to-5 second bursts that I learned while talking on Army radios. William Carlos Williams, if he had been an Army medic. Mary Oliver, sending a 9-line MEDEVAC request.</p><p>The good 21st century war poems will burst-transmit a thought, an image, an experience, a language, a way of thinking. That creates empathy. If my mission is to help bridge the gaps among military veterans and civilian readers — in empathy? In understanding? In appreciation? — then it&#8217;s that engine that I&#8217;d hope to see common in others&#8217; work as well.</p><p><strong>SS</strong>: You have written that “today&#8217;s war poets are uniquely aware that they are writing for an immediate audience.”</p><p><strong>RB</strong>: Back to my earlier point on self-awareness and self-mediation: I don&#8217;t always get that same feeling from the poets of the First World War—even from the ones who were publishing in magazines and newspapers back home. Then again, I also have to remember the humor of WWI trench publications like &#8220;The Wipers Times.&#8221; There&#8217;s no more immediate audience than your buddies in the next foxhole, office, or latrine.</p><p>I, too, wrote an underground newsletter, called &#8220;The Bull Sheet,&#8221; during my own 2003 deployment. I only had to print one or two copies per issue, and posted them over the latrines.</p><p><strong>SS</strong>: Which American poets now writing about the wars are producing the best work?</p><p><strong>RB</strong>: Modern war poets who I regularly seek out, whose work surprises and informs and occasionally makes me laugh? Paul David Adkins (<em>Flying Over Baghdad with Sylvia Plath</em>); Eric Chandler; Colin D. Halloran (<em>Shortly Thereafter</em>); Lisa Stice (<em>Uniform</em>); Jason Poudrier (<em>Red Fields</em>); Karen Skolfield (<em>Frost in the Low Areas</em>); Abby E. Murray (<em>Quick Draw</em>). The more-established writer-veterans are still engaged in the poetry fight, too. Writers like Brian Turner (<em>Here, Bullet</em>) and Benjamin Busch. We are all happy warriors, poetry ronin, leading by example as we find our own ways.</p><p><strong>SS</strong>: Eventually, every war has a canonical poem or two, especially as taught in high schools and colleges. Several of your best poems meet all the criteria: they suggest a way of understanding this war, are apolitical, center on the individual American soldier’s experience, and are accessible without being shallow. Which of your poems do you think most likely to be widely read years from now?</p><p><strong>RB</strong>: If you had asked me when the collection first came out, in late 2015, I probably would&#8217;ve said &#8220;night vision,&#8221; which was inspired by a 2011 helicopter-borne operation called &#8220;Operation Bull Whip.&#8221; The event involved both Afghan and coalition troops working <em>shona ba shona</em> — “shoulder to shoulder.&#8221; Or &#8220;fighting seasons,&#8221; which evokes times I spent in diners as a small-town newspaper reporter, eavesdropping on people&#8217;s conversations to a get a feel for what was happening in their worlds. Now, however, I&#8217;d guess it might be &#8220;here and theirs.&#8221; That one seems to capture our moment of growing suspicions, bad faith, and broken promises. And I&#8217;d like to think that it casts its light on all sides.</p><p><strong>SS</strong>: My own guess is that your fine poem “night vision” might become the go-to poem about the war in Afghanistan, or maybe “dust bunnies and combat boots.” And for the complex feelings that most veterans experience after coming home, “Suburbistan” seems to me to be a very moving expression of disillusionment and nostalgia.</p><p><strong>RB</strong>: &#8220;Suburbistan&#8221; still makes me laugh, every time my family hears helicopters overhead or small arms fire on Range Day. We don&#8217;t live in what you&#8217;d think of as a &#8220;military community.&#8221; I grew up in an active-duty Air Force family, and I&#8217;m familiar with the all-pervasive presence of a large military installation. Shopping at the commissary. Traffic signs flashing &#8220;low-flying aircraft.&#8221; Here, there&#8217;s just a small National Guard post nearby. You&#8217;d think we&#8217;d be insulated here, in the middle of the middle class in middle America, and yet we encounter reminders of war on a nearly daily basis. Not just reminders, but realities. Conex boxes staged at Starbucks. Convoys of ground vehicles delivering troops for training, or equipment for fixing. If people say they don&#8217;t know what&#8217;s going on in the world, they&#8217;re not looking very hard.</p><p><strong>SS</strong>: Have you ever been surprised by which of your poems resonate with readers or editors?</p><p><strong>RB</strong>: Continually! Always! I&#8217;ve even had experiences in which readers have suggested new ways to see and hear my own words. That&#8217;s humbling and gratifying, to find that the work might have exceeded one&#8217;s own expectations or intentions. Recently, I happened to meet up with a member of the 34th Infantry Division&#8217;s alumni association—an older gentleman, not someone with whom I&#8217;d directly served—and he surprised me by spontaneously reciting to a mutual friend a couple of my haiku. He was a former field artilleryman, and my series &#8220;a Forward Observer writes haiku&#8221; both amused and moved him. It was the first time, I told him, that I&#8217;d ever heard my words quoted back to me. The joy of that moment! An arc between generations! Joking around as if we were old barracks buddies. It was a small and glorious thing. A blessing. A gift.</p><p><strong>SS</strong>: You seem to have clearly enjoyed and learned from writing poetry in a variety of forms and with a variety of tones. What sort of poems or techniques are you most interested in writing in the immediate future?</p><p><strong>RB</strong>: The application of humor is a two-edged sword. The tools I use in order to make my work accessible to non-poetry audiences might also obscure my serious intentions. I also worry, however, those techniques might also lose punch if overused. I still execute haiku in themed groups of three, five, or 10, but want to avoid that being a nucleus in future collections. I&#8217;ve been playing with tanka, mostly in context of illuminating suburban scenes that evoke military memories. Those storage boxes staged outside the local Starbucks, for example. Or helicopters operating on high-voltage lines right outside my bedroom window.</p><p>I&#8217;m also potentially developing an unnamed form of free verse, one that involves a couple of stanzas that juxtapose two historical snapshots, followed by a single-line summation that serves as volta. It&#8217;s a little like writing photo cutlines, with an opportunity for editorial comment. I&#8217;m not claiming to have invented anything new and never have — like I&#8217;ve said, even &#8220;war haiku&#8221; isn&#8217;t a new concept — but I&#8217;m enjoying the tinkering, and hoping for duplicable results beyond the occasional good poem.</p><p><strong>SS</strong>: The concluding line of your emerging three-part form seems to make explicit the synthesis that a haiku usually leaves to the reader, after juxtaposing two images. Does this provide a more controlled sense of conclusion and closure than does the more open-ended haiku form?</p><p><strong>RB</strong>: The reporter in me delights in packing as much detail, observed and historical, into the scene descriptions. The &#8220;kicker,&#8221; as it&#8217;d probably be called in newspaper copy, ideally helps the reader make an intellectual connection between the images — a connection that likely would not have otherwise been realized without learned experience or knowledge — but also invites the reader to further contemplate the meaning of that connection. So, yes, it&#8217;s more guided. But I think still sufficiently open-ended, that it might achieve something beyond reportage.</p><p>I&#8217;ve had two examples of the form published, coincidentally by the same publication: The Kurt Vonnegut Memorial Library&#8217;s journal <em>So It Goes</em>. Perhaps my experiments seek to mimic what I love about Vonnegut? Specifically, his capacity to spin seemingly matter-of-fact observations into magical illuminations? The logic of: &#8220;There&#8217;s This, and This, and they are connected by This. What do you think about That?”</p><p><strong>SS</strong>: Do you agree with Ezra Pound that poetry and other literature “is news that stays news&#8221;?</p><p>As a newspaper guy, I once thought everything that happens within quotation marks was concrete and unchangeable. Then I wrote a poem that quoted Mark Twain: &#8220;History doesn&#8217;t repeat itself but it rhymes.&#8221; Turns out, he really didn&#8217;t say that. It was distilled down to that in the 1970s by Canadian poet and quotationist John Robert Columbo.</p><p>I often quote an Army buddy of mine, who was quoting a favorite science-fiction TV show at the time, and maybe a little Buddhist philosophy as well: &#8220;All this has happened before, and all this will happen again.&#8221; The Eternal Return.&#8221; And I paraphrase Carl von Clausewitz: &#8220;The nature of war doesn&#8217;t change; only the character of it.&#8221;</p><p>So, yes, I think poets are in the business of printing and speaking the news that stays news. The words and media and even quotes may change, with every iteration and generation. But the meanings and messages, I hope, are immutable.</p>								</div>
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					<description><![CDATA[Civilian War Casualties Day This is a call for an informal Civilian War Casualties Day. A call to you to help a community group acknowledge once a year the suffering caused, intentionally or coincidentally, to civilians by war and terrorism. Are there many civilian war casualties? The ratio of civilian war deaths to combatants&#8217; deaths ... <a title="Civilian War Casualties Day" class="read-more" href="http://www.stephensossaman.com/civilian-war-casualties-day/" aria-label="Read more about Civilian War Casualties Day">Read more</a>]]></description>
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									<p>This is a call for an informal Civilian War Casualties Day. A call to <em>you </em>to help a community group acknowledge once a year the suffering caused, intentionally or coincidentally, to civilians by war and terrorism.</p><h4><strong>Are there many civilian war casualties?</strong></h4><p>The ratio of civilian war deaths to combatants&#8217; deaths in the last hundred years has been estimated at about ten to one. Perhaps 30,000,000 civilians perished in World War II, and smaller wars since then have caused millions of new civilian casualties. Civilians are dying right now.</p><p>In addition to deaths, countless millions of civilians have been maimed, denied access to medical care, deprived of clean water, made to suffer malnutrition, raped, tortured, rendered homeless, separated from families, deprived of schools, and emotionally traumatized.</p><p>While &#8220;casualties&#8221; refers to people killed, wounded, or missing, I imagine that some people will see a series of concentric circles of secondary civilian casualties &#8212; refugees, populations feeling terrorized and intimidated, the families who grieve, and people whose lives would be better if their governments did not spend fortunes on unnecessary wars.</p><h4><strong>What is the point of Civilian War Casualties Day?</strong></h4><p>The point is to help ourselves and others better understand the scope of suffering, and to consider ways to mitigate that suffering. As a decentralized movement, there is no agenda beyond those two objectives. Individuals and groups who organize events to observe the day might promote specific actions, and one group&#8217;s proposal might contradict another&#8217;s, in keeping with the principles of freedom of speech and freedom of thought.</p><h4><strong>What groups might be most interested?</strong></h4><p>Perhaps certain churches, campus organizations, veterans&#8217; organizations, medical associations, non-profits, peace groups, advocacy organizations, librares, and social organizations. Many individuals have first or second hand experience with civilian war casualties, and are potential organizers and guest speakers.</p><h4><strong>What activities could happen on Civilian War Casualties Day?</strong></h4><p>As a de-centralized movement, individuals and groups in various communities should decide for themselves which events would best help other people understand the extent of civilian casualties, and to consider ways to reduce suffering in the future.</p><p>My personal preference is for emphasis on education and awareness, which involves &#8212; live or online &#8212; events like panel discussions, guest speakers, films and discussion, book club readings, and photography exhibits. Some groups might offer arts performances, public gatherings, or other activities.</p><h4><strong>What can one person do?</strong></h4><p>Aside from helping a group organize events, any one person can hold a sign on a street corner, write a letter to the editor, express an opinion to an elected official, or send a supportive note to a local group whose purpose complements Civilian War Casualties Day.</p><h4><strong>Which day of the year?</strong></h4><p>October 15. Most colleges and schools are in session, or will be after the covid-19 disruptions end.</p><p>Some groups might instead observe Civilian War Casualties Day on a day appropriate to their community&#8217;s history.</p><h4>When did this start?</h4><p>I conducted a one-person demonstration in Napa, California, in 2012.</p><h4><strong>Why veterans should be supportive</strong> </h4><p>Most veterans and active service personnel believe that they have served in order to protect civilians in their own country, and sometimes civilians in other countries. I was sent to Viet Nam in part ostensibly to protect Vietnamese civilians. Some veterans should be able to make strong contributions to our understanding and awareness of civilian war casualties.</p><h4><strong>Stephen Sossaman</strong></h4><h4><strong>Burbank, California</strong></h4>								</div>
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		<title>Review: Alan Farrell, Expended Casings</title>
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					<description><![CDATA[Review: Alan Farrell, Expended Casings In his foreword (whimsically rendered &#8220;Deployed Forward&#8221;) to this collection of his poems, Alan Farrell ridicules pretension, incomprehensibility, poetry as therapy, literary critical jargon, posturing, the cult of free verse, swingebuckling, and shallow war poetry cliches. You sense that he is trying to be restrained and polite, and barely succeeding. ... <a title="Review: Alan Farrell, Expended Casings" class="read-more" href="http://www.stephensossaman.com/review-alan-farrell-expended-casings/" aria-label="Read more about Review: Alan Farrell, Expended Casings">Read more</a>]]></description>
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									<p>In his foreword (whimsically rendered &#8220;Deployed Forward&#8221;) to this collection of his poems, Alan Farrell ridicules pretension, incomprehensibility, poetry as therapy, literary critical jargon, posturing, the cult of free verse, swingebuckling, and shallow war poetry cliches. You sense that he is trying to be restrained and polite, and barely succeeding.</p><p>Farrell&#8217;s reader might then expect carefully crafted and elegantly ironic poems like many of the best World War II work, but the poems in <em>Expended Casings</em> better evoke rondeaus, with their song-like structures, and Kipling ballads, with Farrell&#8217;s skillful use of demotic GI language and the grotesque humor of the military.</p><p>The diction is conversational, colorful, profane, and seemingly spontaneous, and the speaker&#8217;s stance is skeptical, self-effacing, and alert to absurdity. If there is a tear in his eye, it is not from self-pity or sentiment, but from the sting of jungle sweat and battlefield smoke.</p><p>Here is a former professor of language and literature who can write a profane parodic update of Henry Reed&#8217;s &#8220;The Naming of Parts,&#8221; burlesque classic poetic structure with a brief, comically obscene ten-canto expression of GI helplessness, and narrate mythic anecdotes of training and combat that veterans will recognize as true. Alan Farrell stands out as one of the few unique voices among America&#8217;s Vietnam War veteran poets.</p><p>Readers find here 12 poems we will come back to now and again with pleasure.</p><p>My longer review of <em>Expended Casings</em> (2006) is available at the Viet Nam Literature Project <a href="https://vietnamlit.org/page/2/?s=sossaman">here</a>.</p>								</div>
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									<p><em>This brief review first appeared on poetsandwar.com in 2013.</em></p>								</div>
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