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Film review: Shiva Baby

Film review: Shiva Baby (2020) Shiva Baby demonstrates the continuing power and richness of the classic theater trope of a dinner party gone bad. The film is a fast paced comedy that concentrates on family dynamics, inter-generational conflict, sexual complexities, and social repression. But not everyone gathered for the shiva in Shiva Baby understands the anguish and panic of the fewer central characters. They are unaware of the crises all around them, like the unobservant peasants in Peter Bruegel’s “The Fall of Icarus,” or Americans who don’t vote. While some family members are working the

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Turn your stand-up comedy set into a 10-minute play

A stand up comic can write a wonderful 10-minute play out of one routine. All you need for a play are two characters in an interesting conflict. Theaters offering a 10-minute play festivals primarily select comedies, and often appeal to the same audiences that love stand-up. Nearly all ten-minute play festivals explicitly reject monologs. After all, the very nature of theater is unmediated conflict among characters. Those festivals insist on plays having two characters, and sometimes they tolerate a third and fourth, despite the casting complications. Why should a stand-up comedian do this? Maybe you

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10-minute plays: Be kind to your actors

Theater is a collaborative process, of course, at the end of which everyone should be happy, not just the playwright and audience. We want to give actors interesting roles in an interesting play, not a menial chore. We can give them a head start towards success and satisfaction by following these suggestions. Help the actor understand her character You will probably have only one opportunity to do this, since you will not be present at rehearsals or contacted by the director. Do it by adding a tagline on the script cover page and by providing

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10-minute plays: Embrace minimalism

10-minute plays: Embrace minimalism Plays happen on stage, but they also happen in the imaginations of the audience. The less there is on the stage, the more there is to imagine. Go for the great strength of the short play — a spare, intense, concentrated experience arising out of the irreducible essentials of theater: actors and dialog. Just give a theater interesting characters who speak great dialog in an interesting situation, and let that theater have the rest of the creative fun. Write few characters Two good actors with your good dialog can easily sustain

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10-minute plays: What audiences want

10-minute plays: What audiences want Audiences want to be entertained They don’t want to be lectured or hectored. They want their attention kept on something interesting that someone else is doing. As an old Hollywood hand simply advised, don’t be boring. Start with interesting characters in an interesting situation, and then keep your play moving forward. Moving forward can mean new plot elements, or getting deeper into character and theme. Stalls can be fatal to aircraft, acrobats, and plays. Audiences want to be moved emotionally Short play festivals tend to emphasize comedy and variety, for

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The problem with the Poetry Voice

After hearing a recording of Sharon Olds reading the opening of one of her poems, “Balladz,” I am reminded that the default “poetry voice” style of recitation or reading constrains the poem. It is obsolete and dated, but not yet abandoned. The poetry voice, as I hear it, is a relatively monotone and slow recitation at a slightly elevated pitch, sometimes with a bit of lift at the end of the line. There is a pause at the end of each line, whether the poem is end-stopped or enjambed when printed. Poetry voice recitations sound

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Five thoughts about the war in Ukraine, on the fifth day

Five thoughts about the war in Ukraine, on the fifth day 1. When Vladimir Putin continually insisted in public that Russians and Ukrainians are one people, he might not have considered whether this would seriously damage the morale and motivation of Russian soldiers when they are told to kill Ukrainians. 2. Grandmas heading out to fight the Russian army? That is heroic, admirable, and inspirational. Sending them out, now that’s a different matter. 3. Grandmas fighting the Russian army is quixotic, but so too is Putin’s war against grandmas. 4. Crusty old veterans of the

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Interview with Randy Brown

Interview with Randy Brown Randy Brown is a poet, journalist, and editor, and a leading figure in the veterans’ writing movement. He is the author of the award-winning poetry collection Welcome to FOB Haiku (Middle West Press, 2015); editor of a 2016 book-length collection of citizen-soldier journalism; poetry editor of the on-line literary journal As You Were; and a blogger on military experience, culture, and writing. In 2011, Brown was embedded as a civilian journalist with the 34th Infantry “Red Bull” Division, the Iowa National Guard unit with which he served before retiring in 2010.

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Civilian War Casualties Day

Civilian War Casualties Day This is a call for an informal Civilian War Casualties Day. A call to you to help a community group acknowledge once a year the suffering caused, intentionally or coincidentally, to civilians by war and terrorism. Are there many civilian war casualties? The ratio of civilian war deaths to combatants’ deaths in the last hundred years has been estimated at about ten to one. Perhaps 30,000,000 civilians perished in World War II, and smaller wars since then have caused millions of new civilian casualties. Civilians are dying right now. In addition

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Review: Alan Farrell, Expended Casings

Review: Alan Farrell, Expended Casings In his foreword (whimsically rendered “Deployed Forward”) to this collection of his poems, Alan Farrell ridicules pretension, incomprehensibility, poetry as therapy, literary critical jargon, posturing, the cult of free verse, swingebuckling, and shallow war poetry cliches. You sense that he is trying to be restrained and polite, and barely succeeding. Farrell’s reader might then expect carefully crafted and elegantly ironic poems like many of the best World War II work, but the poems in Expended Casings better evoke rondeaus, with their song-like structures, and Kipling ballads, with Farrell’s skillful use

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